Znowu to zrobiłam O.o My loveletter to nobody #2 aka The longest shit ever writen (by me)
I to ma być znowu piosenka. Nawet coś mi w głowie gra, ale jest jakoś podejrzanie podobne do
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No dobra, let's face it.
Rising star
Those memories I've held so dear now find its way out
The days of love and thrill and laugh are what I dream about
Entwined in eternal unity beyond the time, in space
We would dwell in the ocean black and light each other's ways
If only you could see with my eyes what you have now become
A broken solitary with no faith inside his heart
There's no life in your ocean eyes, no hope in empty gaze
Your one wish could change it all if you dared to take the chance
No darkness has the power to hide me from you
No universe is wide enough to take my eyes off of you
I'll always be here guiding you and shelter you from pain
You only need to think about me and believe I'm out there
Long ago I could be so close but time has made me go
And you realised your northern star was what you needed the most
I saw your tears, I felt your pain, I wished I could be there
To end your suffering and light up your saddened face
Now hear my call and open your eyes, see the rising star
Above the woe and all false lights notice your only one
Share with me the astral dream, let our worlds collide
And we'll shine forever like diamonds in the blackness of northern sky
No darkness has the power to hide me from you
No universe is wide enough to take my eyes off of you
I'll always be here guiding you and shelter you from pain
You only need to think about me and believe I'm out there
Whenever you look into the Constellation of Tears
Remember I am there watching over you
Whenever you miss the brightest star of the universe
Just call my name and I'll shine
Only for you
No darkness has the power to hide me from you
No universe is wide enough to take my eyes off of you
I'll always be here guiding you and shelter you from pain
You only need to think about me and believe I'm out there
Inspirowane bardzo mocno twórczością Janiego, i bardzo mocno słabsze od jego tekstów :D W ogóle to mam wrażenie, że coś pomieszałam z czasami, ostatnio wszędzie bym wstawiała Perfecty. Jak ktoś się dopaczy błędów to proszę o info! I moje słownictwo jest zbyt mało sophisticated, czas się wziąć za naukę.
No, to sama sobie już skomentowałam, teraz liczę na Was :D
Co myślicie? Jak bardzo jest źle? Jakieś uwagi, rady, wskazówki?